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If - written by Andrew Cook
I myself did not write this but it is about me so I felt the need to post it on here.My boyfriend wrote this about me and i think its a beautifull poem so just wanted to share it with everyone on here Smile



If

If my heart could sing it would sing you a song
One that you would play on repeat all day long
If my heart could dance it would dance all through the night
From when the sun goes down until the beginning of light
If my heart could write it would pen you a book
An epic that captures you from the first look
If my heart could run it would run you a race
Thinking of you would spur it into first place
If my heart could paint it would paint your face
An angelic vision filled with such beauty and grace
But the only thing that it can do is beat
Pumping blood around from my head to my feet
So while it may not be much, it does that for you
Regulating the flow of un-oxygenated blood that's blue
I admit there are more impressive feats
Things you could put on stage and sell seats
But it's good at what it does, it should be by now
It's had millions of tries to learn exactly how
So the quite simple task is at least done well
I still have a pulse and that's easy to tell
And so the heart in my chest is now eternally yours
So full of love it's bursting out at the pores


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I like it. As You know, it's hard to review a poem that is written in the language that is not Your native language. But I understand the words and all I can say is that I really like it. It's a good one!


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Thankyou your comment means alot and I think when I tell him what you said he will be pleased because he was shy about it and thought I wouldnt like it but no one has written me poetry before and i think its romantic of him to think so much towards me that it inspired him to write this for me.

I wish i could write poems but i havent the tallent I find it hard to be as creative as this


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Yes, talent is something that is necessary to create poetry. It’s platitude but true. There is no reason to be shy, but I think this is a good attitude. There are too many people who hasn’t got the talent but they thinks they are nimble poets. I think that Your boyfriend knows he has still a lot to learn and with that attitude I’m sure he will.
I have wrote some poems in the past and I know that You have to learn non-stop, in every minute of Your life You have to do Your best to get better and better. Poetry must be always on Your mind… then sometimes it really appears there and You have a luck, You can write something good. This luck is something I truely wish to him.


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